Hi Riea. I like the PowToon app as it is always visually appealing and colourful. Your slides moved a bit quickly for me to read all of the content and process it and I found the background music to be too slow and relaxed. I would suggest a more catchy tune to really grabbed viewers. I found your slides to be well laid out and had good flow. As for your Venture Pitch, you clearly put a lot of effort into this assignment and researched to ensure you had all information. My suggestion would be to present all your findings in a better way. The PDF was long and it would have been nice to have some voice over or even just transferred that data into a slideshow or Prezi. I just found the presentation made the content a bit flat for me. As for your actual product, I think you have a great business plan and idea and I also feel like you did a good job with what information to chose to include. I also found this assignment to be challenging and frustrating at times. You’ve done a excellent job though 🙂