Hi Ryan! Thank you for sharing your uniq…

Hi Ryan! Thank you for sharing your unique venture with us! I appreciated the unique format that you used for your venture pitch.
Your elevator pitch was detailed and had me wanting to learn more. One of my suggestions would be to continue the voiceover throughout the entire pitch. By hearing your voice we are able to hear the passion you have for your product and focus on the information as opposed to trying to keep up with reading the screen. Is the picture in your elevator pitch the exact learning box that will arrive monthly? You stated that consumers would receive one once a month. What changes month to month? Are the consumers individual house holds, classrooms or schools? I would need some more details before I was able to invest.

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