Hi, Sarah, very well done presentation!…

Hi, Sarah, very well done presentation! I am fascinated by your knowledge of the topic and your passion in repairing learning disabilities. You have definitely presented a well constructed venture pitch that unveils a new market possibility! Though, I do find that there is a need to address your venture concepts in greater details so that I can get an idea how you can differentiate from lumosity and others. In addition, I find your ROI are not well justified. How low can you increase the high school drop out rates? How many more students can finish secondary education by using this software? A quantitative estimate would make this cost/benefits analysis more easily interpreted.