Hi Scott. Thank you for reviewing my pit…

Hi Scott. Thank you for reviewing my pitch. This is amazing feedback, and I do appreciate the critical analysis. I agree the initial investment amount seems quite low. On a personal note, I really did struggle with coming up with a number, and in the grand scheme of things I realize that financials are not my biggest strength, but something I am definitely willing to learn more about. Regarding your question on which client would be more profitable–corporate eLearning or education institutions, I would lean more towards the former. This is especially because an increasing number of educational institutions are outsourcing their content development. While working as an instructional designer in Mumbai, I was often developing content fro US-based universities–so I would definitely bet on more profits from the corporate sector.