Hi Vivien, well done, I appreciate your effort to make a video for your elevator pitch. I really appreciate that you made a video of yourself speaking to the audience in your elevator pitch. This is a sincere effort to make a real venture pitch and I congratulate you for doing it. I understand the problem you are addressing and I have a good guess on what your proposed solution is. You are tackling a big problem and worthwhile cause. It is a neat idea, at least what I have in mind you meant for a venture concept. I am guessing your venture concept is to offer IB programmes online. You said your venture is “an online platform I created to disseminate learning materials”; I am hoping you can understand how this causes confusion about your venture in the minds of your viewers and reviewers. I am puzzled about the name of your venture; does the name mean something? The reason is that it would help if the venture has a catchy name and I believe with some thought one could come up with a name that gets attention.