I think that the quality and graphic pre…

I think that the quality and graphic presentation of this pitch are relatively high. That commitment to the quality of the presentation pulled me in and made me want to explore further. However, by the time I was finished I still found myself questioning exactly what I was being asked to invest in? A more clear, comprehensive overview of the product at the front would have helped me visualize and absorb what you are pitching. All of the accompanying material is nicely thought out and presented in a concise fashion (problems, solutions, advantages etc) but a more comprehensive overview would have helped me better evaluate the opportunity.