Interesting Colleen! I have to say as soon as your Elevator pitch started, my toes started tapping and I was watching. Great choice of background music to grab my attention. Some slides went a bit quickly but overall your product grabbed my attention, as you gave enough information to make me want more but not totally enough to understand completely what exactly your product does and how it works. I immediately wanted to click on your site, so well done on making your Elevator Pitch catchy! As for your website, it is very content heavy which at times seemed daunting to read through, a voice over or something might have been better. I would suggest your change your opening picture, as it makes your product seem religious based and that can turn many people off. I now read that others also made this suggestion, it just seems to narrow your market. Otherwise, I think you have a very creative and unique product and feel you did a great job collecting data and relaying your purpose!