Like the website and the concept, but I…

Like the website and the concept, but I feel your elevator pitch was a bit too long. Much of what was shared in the video was then posted on the site. I feel a better approach would be to keep the pitch shorter, plant the seeds of interest, and then focus on the larger picture and specific details by having me move through the webpage.

For navigation simplicity, perhaps a “next” button could be posted at the bottom of the pages to allow for better flow rather than having to return to the top of the page every time.

Perhaps I missed it, but is there a specific type of investor you’re looking for in this project as I’m not sure everyone would be aware of some of the more target-specific language you used.

Thanks for sharing!

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