One of the biggest strengths of this ven…

One of the biggest strengths of this venture is the passion behind it! This passion and commitment is exhibited throughout both the elevator and venture pitch! Well done! All of the venture pitch areas are highlighted within the pitch, but the $1,000,000 request is seemingly unreasonable as it is not explained how it will be used. More explanation about how this million dollar investment is intended to be used to design, promote, and support the app in the global market is needed in order to convince the potential investor to get on board. {In my own pitch, I used this tool here: to help determine the cost for the design of an app. The I Love Reading app is more complex than mine and is also seeking a global market, so more expenses would ensue. This tool may help in deriving a break down to your investment request.} Well done, overall!

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