REVIEW: Both pitches very clearly define the pain point: that educators need inexpensive and specific training in educational technology. You do a great job at covering all your bases by stating the value, summarizing the market, drawing attention to competitors, and defining a market strategy. Although the technological medium chosen for the venture pitch is not very engaging, you provide holistic information that sketches a comprehensive picture of the venture in a well-organized fashion. However, I am not convinced I should invest. As leahbio mentioned, investors should really know how the $800,000 that your venture needs will be spent. This is crucial because it highlights specific, market-driven challenges that you need to convince me that your venture can overcome. I am glad that you acknowledge your competition. However, you offer little insight into how your solution is better than others so I cannot confidently evaluate the uniqueness of your venture.