Great work on your venture pitch! Some people have already noted the timing of the elevator pitch – it was a great format though!
In your venture pitch, I really liked that you included an overview of this venture – that provided me with a concise overview of your project – this could have even been placed at the beginning of your venture pitch to provide investors/readers with a basic overview of your venture and proposal. I also enjoyed reading your reflection (you shouldn’t be so hard on yourself – this is a fantastic idea and would really benefit the medial world!)
If I were a potential investor, I would definitely consider investing in your idea.
Thanks for sharing 🙂