REVIEW: Hi Riea. Others have already noted the issues with timing (which can be difficult with Powtoon) and the use of ‘simplier’, but if those mistakes were corrected I think your elevator pitch is sound. I really liked the look and feel of your venture pitch; it conveyed professionalism and looked to me like it was designed for a professional medical audience. Although this isn’t an ‘academic’ assignment, I can see how there is a definite need for technical/sourced writing with this product, and I thought it added credibility to your pitch. In addition, I don’t actually think your product as an unrealistic as you think; with a lot of VC projects, the investors and management team work out the kinks and fill in the gaps as they go along. RECOMMENDATION: I wouldn’t invest in your product, but that wouldn’t be through any fault related to your pitches; rather, it is because I know nothing about the field of medicine and wouldn’t be able to provide anything to help grow your business.