REVIEW: Hi Sheila, what an interesting c…

REVIEW: Hi Sheila, what an interesting concept! I believe the strength of both your pitches comes from the high quality presentation, stimulating visuals, and confident narration. The concept itself is very interesting, and appears to have strong merit for the educational setting. As an EVA however, I did find the two pitches somewhat repetitive, and would have appreciated greater distinction in both the content and the visuals. I believe your experience both as an educator and your background with Apple support your position and the authenticity of the need you present. Your elevator pitch was a little long, though I can appreciate how difficult it is to condense that much information into less than a minute. Overall, as an EVA I would require more information before investing. In particular, I wonder about compatibility with hardware, maintenance, additional costs, etc.

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