REVIEW: I found the idea of the venture refreshingly new. TheVenture pitch is very creative and engaging with great cartoons. I also appreciated the fact that the use of cartoons was not simply to visualize what was said, but included an element of fun in them. The pace is just right for people to process the information. You also seem to have a very clear design of what the product would do, what features it would have. This is something rare as a lot of pitches I saw were a little vague when it came to how the product works. A lot of thought has also gone into the technical details of the product like requirements, preferred language, what platforms are supported etc. It is surprising to see how so much information could be summed up so clearly and engagingly in th given time. On the flip side however, I feel that the pitch is targetted more at customers than investors. It does not define the ask or the return on investment. Also there are no numbers on the market size or competitors. I would have also liked to see a human face to add to the believability of the venture. The elevator pitch could do better with a voice over / music. It feels a little blank. Overall, I really think that the idea has great potential, just a few grounded statistics would take it there.