REVIEW- I think you have a really interesting idea here in your venture pitch. It is something that could benefit so many! Your video made me want to check out your site to learn more. So in that sense I think your elevator pitch is really effective. I know it is hard to include so much information in such a short time but it might be a good idea to include a bit more info about your market potential in the elevator pitch. Your site is very informative, I especially like how you have included your inspiration. Thinking more like an investor I think it would be nice for your elevator pitch to be a bit more visually similar to the venture pitch. I think that this would be an interesting project to pursue!