REVIEW: I thought this an excellent vent…

REVIEW: I thought this an excellent venture concept and pitch. The elevator pitch is very clear, refined. It presents the problem and solution in a very clear and succinct manner. I have a good idea of what this venture is all about from watching that. The pitch itself was very put together. There is a clear presentation of the problem. The statistics presented in the pitch shocked me greatly, and they definitely did a good job at communicating the problem and foster motivation and desire to change it. There is a clear target for this venture. The metaphor of the name behind the venture is great, and I am glad you took the time to emphasize it. It shows the thought and intention behind the venture, and I felt more connected with this venture for understanding the meaning of the name. I really like that time was allotted to explaining the meaning behind the name because it gives the company and venture more substance and presence. I think that having this is a great way to differentiate the venture and make it stand out. As an EVA, I would recommend investing in this venture. It seems well thought out and has the potential to solve the problem presented in the pitch and that this venture could change Africa and lead to advancements in STEM research which could potentially impact not only Africa but the rest of the world.