REVIEW: Like James, I like the way you started your elevator pitch. It’s interesting and quite refreshing. I also like how your pitch is set against a campus background, rather than just a blank wall. It makes your pitch setting authentic. Plus you’re not staring straight into the camera, so it seems more natural. Elevator pitch aside, I also like how you have outlined your market strategy model to include membership, sponsorship and so on. My suggestions for improvement would be to end your pitch less abruptly and to remove the transition effect. Great work!