REVIEW: This pitch has a lot of great id…

REVIEW: This pitch has a lot of great ideas and like Manize mentions sounds a lot like a broad, all encompassing vision of what the education system should be like. I definitely agree with the sentiments and think that it has a similar flavor to my own venture pitch. I did have a few concerns with the venture pitch though. Though the ideas are broad and grand, I’m still a little unsure what I would be investing in exactly. I’m thinking it’s basically an online school with some physical/local elements. But I didn’t get a clear picture of this in the pitch. The video was extremely slow which didn’t help with my motivation to keep watching to find out more (but I did!). The numbers that were given near the end were flashed up quickly and I was a little unsure what exactly I was looking at or how they related to the pitch….especially the ask for the specific dollar amount at the end with the promise of millions. It all felt a little bit vague and Dragon’s Den-ish. Overall, I have to say that I *think* I agree with the idea, but I’d need more information before investing.