[REVIEW]: Well developed and convincing…

[REVIEW]: Well developed and convincing argument for why Concierge is an excellent investment for businesses. The main pain point – the stressful nature of onboarding – is elaborated on with key subpoints, including both the employers’ and employees’ perspectives of the process. Target markets (HR Department & Enterprises) are focused and their needs are clearly identified and described. Clear competitive advantages between Concierge and other similar platforms were stated; this section could have been elaborated on by introducing a few features of these competitors and how they contrast with Concierge. The opportunity forecast of Concierge in relation to the “gig” economy and future of businesses moving towards more employees working remotely wrapped up the pitch nicely. The one main improvement to this venture pitch would be the addition of a financial overview for investors on funding, benefits of investing, and estimated returns. Overall, this venture was probably the most convincing in terms of actual implementation and solving a real problem in today’s economy. Great job!