Ryan your venture pitch was very detailed, thorough and concise. You considered all angles and provided a support to your clienteles from beginning to end. Key highlights for me include that Open Allies is a not-for-profit educational venture, that it understands the administrative constraints, and that it supports crowdfunding for schools who may not to be able to afford the idea. The pitch is suitable for different types of institutions and as thus is aiming high. This may be a good or bad thing. For me, as an EVA, I would like to know specifically what you can offer. I guess you have me hooked and wanting more info. I would be interested in knowing more about this venture.
PS. the Piktochart design was clear and easy to navigate. Thank you for this pitch.