Thank you Mel and Emily, I appreciate your review so much and suggestions! Emily I really liked your Foodiki venture though I was not officially assigned to review your venture–it was one of the first I looked at. Thank you for taking the time to write such a though review. I’ll change the title from Business Plan to something else and add a section more about the competitors–great ideas.
In your venture I really liked your layout and design on Prezi–not cluttered but detailed nonetheless with an appealing upward line. The menu of activities you offered was quite exhaustive and smart. Your elevator pitch was thoughtful and to the point and good brand image too.