Thanks for your pitch Sarah. You have great presence on camera. I felt that it was well researched and interesting. Your presentation clearly explained the pain points, the relevance of your idea and a clear picture of how your venture could be achieved. I would have liked to see how the $100,000 requested investment would be spent on the venture. My favorite parts were when you gave examples of existing ventures that proved how your venture could be successful. Great pitch!

Thanks for the comment, Steve. The business side of this was most challenging for me. I am thinking the $100,000 will go towards building my platform from the ground up. But, I am sure I will find out that there is more to it than that, which is why it is so important that I build a good venture team. I agree, the lack of a concrete business plan is something I need to work on. :)
Thanks for the comment, Steve. The business side of this was most challenging for me. I am thinking the $100,000 will go towards building my platform from the ground up. But, I am sure I will find out that there is more to it than that, which is why it is so important that I build a good venture team. I agree, the lack of a concrete business plan is something I need to work on. :)
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