There is a grammatical mistake in the introduction (should read “committing to their own companies”; not “commit to their own companies.) Your reflection is excellent. Your elevator pitch is interesting and engaging with the dialogue and visuals you used, but there are some grammatical errors here too. I am very impressed by this idea and the website you created for your venture pitch! You have excellent information about competitors and marketing! I would like to hear more about the cost of the product and how you are different from your competitors.