This is a super detailed evaluation of a…

This is a super detailed evaluation of an interesting opportunity that it is clear you understand and have a great deal of interest and expertise in. I think the presentation itself is too long and demands more time to get into and evaluate than a potential investor might take based on a cold call. I did not find myself getting excited about the idea from the outset but rather felt a little overwhelmed by all of the material I had to dig into to get to the meat of your idea. When I did get into the material I found this to be a very interesting idea and worthy of further evaluation based on the potential market and novel idea. That said, with some refinement of the idea and improvement in the presentation I could see this a viable product worthy of potential investment.