Your elevator pitch and platform for the venture pitch were both eye-catching and engaging – I loved the baby picture! I liked your marketing idea of allowing potential buyers to test out to product by buying credits per use and then opting for a membership if they would like to. The sharing of content is a growing market and the idea of using an e-store is a good one. The expertise you and your partners have in the area of ELL makes you very competent to carry out this venture. I myself do not have the expertise to responsibly invest in your venture but wish you the best as you go forward.

2 Dec
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Hi Brenda, Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad you liked the visuals and design. I will continue to work on improving the content to present the Venture in a better way in the future. Thank you for your input.
Wanyi Wong @wanyiw85
Hi Brenda, Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad you liked the visuals and design. I will continue to work on improving the content to present the Venture in a better way in the future. Thank you for your input.
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