Your suggestions are very helpful in making my overall pitch stronger. Your idea about figuring out the area of the farm (or plot of land) before ‘buying’ was actually something I was trying to incorporate into my pitch, but I can see how my examples were not clear! I haven’t come across endogenous and exogenous games before; you’re right in that it’s a point in my favour when trying to differentiate from Prodigy. Financials are definitely not my strong suit in this venture, but I was intending for the stake to be in this alternate Stardew Valley team I’ve created. Thank you for your feedback!