Your suggestions are very helpful in mak…

Your suggestions are very helpful in making my overall pitch stronger. Your idea about figuring out the area of the farm (or plot of land) before ‘buying’ was actually something I was trying to incorporate into my pitch, but I can see how my examples were not clear! I haven’t come across endogenous and exogenous games before; you’re right in that it’s a point in my favour when trying to differentiate from Prodigy. Financials are definitely not my strong suit in this venture, but I was intending for the stake to be in this alternate Stardew Valley team I’ve created. Thank you for your feedback!